Preliminary Task - Changes to Final Versions

From reading through the comments that my target audience had made I have made a few changes to my work:

·         On the cover page my target audience mentioned that on the right side of my cover there was too much bare space so I added two cover lines. This will take up space within the right side of the magazine page.

·         Within the cover page my target audience also mentioned that the back ground image was blurry. I resized the image trying to make it less blurry.

·         On the contents page my target audience mentioned that the main photo was too blurry and stretched so I resized the image so it didn’t look as stretched and blurry.

·         The boxes around the words “6^TH” and “Coming Up” was mentioned that I should get rid of them as it made the magazine look unprofessional. So I changed the colour of the boxes to yellow the same colour as the background therefore they would blend in and be not be noticeable