This is my Magazine front page. I have asked a few students in year 12 to evaluate my front page to see if I can improve it.
Rachel Jinks
I like the layout of my front page I feel that everything looks professional, the text size is appropriate, easy to read and the colour stands out well from the background. The main word “success” has a bold red line around each letter; this makes the word stand out more to the audience. The cover line and main title has also got a bold red line around each letter, these will stand out to the audience.
I feel that the background photograph works well with the magazine, the photograph hasn’t got too many colours therefore the audience attention wouldn’t be taken away from the heading of the magazine. As the background photograph hasn’t got many colours, I can use basically any colour for text and it will still stand out from the background.
However I feel that I have too much bare space, this makes the magazine cover less appealing to the audience as the magazine won’t catch their attention straight away.
Sophie Ward (Target Audience)
I like how the main heading and the cover line stands out, with a red line around the word this caught my attention straight away. The background image looks a bit blurry, when you look at the image closely. I like the logo I can tell that this school does a lot of sport as the logo has an image at the bottom of a running person.
Ife Ahove (Target Audience)
Change colour of the shape in the bottom right corner and make it smaller. The background picture is blurry. Right side of the magazine cover looks bare and boring. Red line around the main heading and cover line works well with the yellow and makes the words stand out.