Preliminary Task - Development - Font cover (draft)

Here is my draft version of my front cover. I am going to ask several students to evaluate my work. Telling me how I could improve my work and what they like about my work.

Rachel Jinks

I like the background colour although the colour is basically the same colour as the text for the word “contents” I still feel that I the background is effective. The main photograph looks too stretched.

I like every photograph apart from the main photograph. I feel every photograph clearly shows the audience what this page will be about e.g. sport, Remembrance Day etc.

I don’t like the back box around “6^TH” and “coming up.

Sophie Ward (Target Audience)

I don’t think the Word “6^th) or “coming up” should have a black box around it. At the top of the contents page there should be a picture or text as it looks bare.

The main photograph look too stretched.

Ife Ahove (Target Audience)

Should get “remembrance day pg 21” all on the same line like the rest of the words on the content page. The main image looks too long and stretched. Underneath the word “Contents” it looks too bare.

I like that the “sports” image is the same image as the background on the front cover.